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RE: Woman: A Rare Gem

in #untalented7 years ago (edited)

What a sweet and sentimental article, @godwinj!

I have some English language skills improvement suggestions for you:

As A Mother: This one no be beans at all In this aspect,

  • I love this as you have written it because it seems to me that it is a phrase that is local to you, and so it gives a glimpse into your culture.

  • IF you wanted to say it in a more common English phrase you would say, "This one is not to be underestimated by any means.

I will look at the child bearing which is a whole lot of burden to her talkless of upbringing the child.

  • First off, there is her childbearing role which is a huge burden to her, not to mention the upbringing of the child.

She's the first teacher to the child, and also a family health officer in the household.

  • She's the child's first teacher, and she's also the household's Family Health Officer.

Always concerned about the physical well being of the members.

  • She is always concerned about the physical well-being of her family members.

I have upvoted and resteemed this post as one of my daily curation project post promotions. This article will be featured in the @mitneb Curation Trail Project Daily Report on 08 JAN 2018.

Cheers!

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Wow.. thanks @mitneb, it's a pleasure.