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RE: Plainclothes Prophets [Day 14]
This poem bowled me over @carmalain7
The surreal and unique imagery
conjoined twin cars holding hands on the beltway
really underpins the disillusionment expressed by the poem. Your use of extended metaphor creates a fantastic story board of images
the line of chalk erased away
which finally comes round to – ‘erasure susurrus’. Then this imagery continues subtly throughout, creating a thematic tone. really liked it m8 :-)
thank you thank you, Raj, always honored when my scrawlings get a read from a writer I admire, and your writing certainly fits that!