You presented it in a very honest way, so it doesn't come off in a bad way at all. Many times constructive criticism is a good motivator for restaurants to do better! 🙂

Luckily my family has gotten good at subbing for onions and garlic when we all get together. She does have a hard time eating out though because it's in everything! I think some places are easier for me even to get a vegan meal than her avoid those.