So where's the second part? I want it, and I want it now!! Nice story, although I must admit, "Dota!? Can't she think of anything that could be interesting, this would surely ruin the story". But after reading it, yeah, if the names would've been different I would have been impressed more so than this. But a great piece nonetheless... I wonder how should I face this with my entry... Hmmm, now you've got me thinking @kothy. Great job kid!