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RE: 'Abandoned' - Steemit Story Chain #9 Where You Write the Story and 100 Whaleshares for the Winner

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There was a stinging pain in my thighs.I touched my thighs and felt it wet and warm.When I looked at my hands it was covered in blood.My knees started to shiver and the pain sharpened with every step I took forward.I felt dizzying,my vision blurred and I couldn't catch my breath. I felt like I was going to throw up.I tried harder but my legs gave up and fell down flat on the road.I felt the cold tar against my cheeks and smelled dust.I could hear footsteps coming nearer and nearer.I tried to lift my face and look back but it just went pitch black.

When I opened my eyes I couldn't see anything clearly.I wished all this was just a dream and blinked my eyes.Slowly the vision became clear.My heart was pounding.I couldn't move.My hands and legs were duct taped to a metal chair.My thighs pained like hell.It was some kind of a laboratory with many specimen jars.And my vision was not clear enough to see what was in it.It smelled of some strong chemical.It made me wince and turn my head sideways.

It was only then I realised I was not the only captive.God,what the hell is this?Just a few feet away from me was the lady who I thought was kidnapping me strapped to another chair,unconscious.

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wow! great writing .. really good build up and a hell of a twist!

Thank you soo much @jorlauski 😊