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RE: ADSactly Short Story - Broken Rule of Engagement

in #story6 years ago

I was pleasantly surprised by your story, @royalrose. That twist at the end, it was really brilliant. The perspective you had given us at the beginning of each of the characters definitely changed as the plot unfolded. It was great! Specifically the way you subtitle each part and we go into the story. The central characters are not flat, but complex, and that gives a nuance of evolution to each of them. This story leads us to think that sometimes appearances deceive, that not only can we be led by the version of one, but that we must listen to all the parties involved. Also, that there is no feeling more harmful than jealousy and revenge. These feelings can cause people to commit insanity. Congratulations to you and @adsactly for this excellent story.

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Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words.