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RE: ADSactly Short Story - The Pull of the Pool.

in #story6 years ago

A very interesting life story, @royalrose. I say life not only because it is based on or nourished by the facts and situations that mark our destinies in today's common world; but also because, to a great extent, the threat or temptation of death is opposed to the animated alternative of life. So it is with the protagonist, and it has happened with Ada; both, mainly, the first one mainly because of the influence of the course of life taken by Ada, in spite of its initial failure. The story is very well told; it captivates us and holds us to the end. The image of the public bus in front of the private vehicle efficiently expresses the significance of the different vital destinations. I thank you for your nice story, and @adsactly for spreading it.

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Thank you very much. I appreciate your words.