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RE: True Story Of Our Adventure To Niagara Falls

in #story • 7 years ago (edited)

This is poetic writing. I do not think it is an accident that the Niagara Falls waterfall itself does not actually make an appearance in this short story. I love that the focus of the story, the climactic episode before the return trip home, is in fact a dust devil outside a laundromat. You are focusing on the little things here along the journey - this is a post about the journey, not a post about the tourist destination. The final paragraph is an absolutely beautiful piece of writing in my eyes and brings this whole thing together.

Much love - Carl "Totally Not A Bot" Gnash / @carlgnash



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     7 years ago (edited)

    Thank you so much for taking the time to read and acknowledge my story! It means so much to me. I really appreciate the details of your comment.

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