Thank you for your entry @spalatino. I think if it had been done in 1st person it would have immersed the reader a little more, but over all well done!
Thank you for your entry @spalatino. I think if it had been done in 1st person it would have immersed the reader a little more, but over all well done!
Thank you. To be honest, I started writing a 1st person story, but how the story progressed, at some point the identity of David and Craig was revealed too soon, so I modified it like this, I wanted to keep the lobster part hidden until the end. I am glad you liked it despite the form.