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RE: Hellbent - Part 1 (My Original Short Story)
Hey buddy, thank you so much for the feedback! Much appreciated!
(p.s. Error corrected. Thanks for spotting in.)
Hey buddy, thank you so much for the feedback! Much appreciated!
(p.s. Error corrected. Thanks for spotting in.)
It really is a good start, from some of the comments, I may be wrong on the relationship direction, but will wait and see and read how it all pans out.