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RE: My Top Essential Tips for Improving Literary Creativity

in #story7 years ago

The room I'm sitting in is hot. Another hot spring day has passed. It's the third one in a row. I can hear my dog heavy breathing trying to sleep. He still needs to lose his fur. The warm weather arrived way to early. He just farted in his sleep and it's not helping me breath. Shouldn't give him fish next time. I'm choking.

My laptop barely can stand the heat from the day time. The fan is blowing non stop. My laptop explodes when I read @ezzy post. It's to damn awesome! I'll buy a new one tomorrow.

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Lol!!! Oh man... Now if ever I needed an example to showcase the points I was trying to make, this would be perfect! Except I think you don't have to imagine this story, it's sounds to me more like your actual real day events!!

Man... It's always such a pleasure to get any feedback from you. I couldn't have hoped for more! :)