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RE: "Hidden Secret"-Base on a true story....

in #story6 years ago

Hello there @rembertomarsada 😉 so glad that you also joined the pufc this week👍 I think @celinavisaez did a great job to featured you.. I like your story though, but.. I think the revealed is a bit too much 😊 because how could he didn't know about that all this time, how did they built the basement treasure keep without him known ... aahh he might be busy blaming his parents for doing that job.

But I can read the message though.. and I think you made a mistake when his parent's asked about roland and you didn't wrote Roland's name.

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Yeah, You are a very great reader ma'am. I should have put it Roland than Ryan. I made a terrible mistake.. I noticed it when I Review the story..

That's not terrible at all @rembertomarsada 😉 you're quite a good author👍 I enjoy reading your story and would love to read more from you too.

Thanks ma'am. Thanks God I already publish the chapter 2 of the story. tomorrow I will publish the Chapter 3 on it.

Thanks to you too for the information 😉 I'll check them out @rembertomarsada and don't forget to join the pifc again this week