The Longest Night (a short story)

in #story7 years ago

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She hugged all her worries and started crying…
He opened the bottle of beer and squeezed it in his fingers…
She was counting her worries and wiping them off with each single tear she cried…
He was thinking of her and longed more with each single sip he made…
When her tears dried out, she thought of him and her lips made a bitter smile…
He picked up the ring she threw at him and recalled how nice it looked on her finger…
She recalled the day when he came down on his knee and proposed… how happy she was back then…
With each sip, he felt her closer…
With each memory, she regretted about her thrown ring stronger…
 Two young people had their longest night in their lives…

 Before they re-met again… 
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Wonderful, Ani. #thealliance

You have such a way with words

lovely story!

glad you liked it Jaynie

I did indeed! Some people are great story tellers... you are one of them :)

aw thank you )

Very nice @anialxander. Upvoted and followed.

followed back )

I have had one of those nights. And by one I mean a hundred of them lol. Neat story. I like imagining whats next

really? wow - seems like you had a dramatic life )

You have no idea. Lol

Nice! Will this story continue? Please say yes! :)

well it was just a flash fiction... not planned on continuation

I'm impressed!