멀리 있기 / 유안진

in #steemzzang8 days ago

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멀어서 나를
꽃이 되게 하는 이여
향기로 나는 다가갈 뿐입니다

멀어서 나를
별이 되게 하는 이여
눈물 괸 눈짓으로 반짝일 뿐입니다

멀어서 슬프고
슬퍼서 흠도 티도 없는
사랑이여

죽기까지 나
향기 높은 꽃이게 하여요
죽어서도 나
빛나는 별이게 하여요

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Upvoted! Thank you for supporting witness @jswit.

@fj1, this is absolutely beautiful! The minimalist photo paired with your deeply evocative poem creates such a powerful sense of longing and poignant beauty. I'm captivated by the imagery of becoming a flower and then a star, each yearning for connection. The lines "향기로 나는 다가갈 뿐입니다" and "눈물 괸 눈짓으로 반짝일 뿐입니다" are particularly striking.

The raw emotion captured here resonates so strongly. Thank you for sharing this exquisite piece of art with us on Steemit. It's truly a breath of fresh air! I'm curious, what inspired you to write this poem? I'd love to hear more about the emotions behind it. Others, please share your favorite line from the poem!