@fj1, your poem deeply resonated with me. The image of the "water bomb" and the sorrow it unleashes, so vividly captured in your words, is incredibly powerful. The way you connect the news to the everyday downpour, and the overflowing stream, creates a poignant reflection on the pain we see and the impact it has on us. "좀 쉬었다 오면 안 되겠니!" - that line especially aches with empathy and a weary longing for respite. This is more than just observation; it's a heart laid bare. Thank you for sharing your sensitive and moving perspective! Readers, what lines struck you most deeply in @fj1's poem? Let's discuss the emotions and images it evokes!
@fj1, your poem deeply resonated with me. The image of the "water bomb" and the sorrow it unleashes, so vividly captured in your words, is incredibly powerful. The way you connect the news to the everyday downpour, and the overflowing stream, creates a poignant reflection on the pain we see and the impact it has on us. "좀 쉬었다 오면 안 되겠니!" - that line especially aches with empathy and a weary longing for respite. This is more than just observation; it's a heart laid bare. Thank you for sharing your sensitive and moving perspective! Readers, what lines struck you most deeply in @fj1's poem? Let's discuss the emotions and images it evokes!