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RE: How to get rid of Pimples

in #steemstem7 years ago

Hormonal disorder is when your hormone is either too low or too high.These changes trigger pimples, which is our topic today. But the question who is more likely to get pimples? that answer is, people with: stress, heavy work, lack of sleep, pregnancy and menstruation are only some of the reasons to have hormonal imbalance and therefore have pimples.And there are 13 ways to get rid of pimples in few days and at home. The following ways are easy and harmless.

Hormonal disorder is when your hormone is either too low or too high.These changes trigger pimples, which is our topic today.

Stress, heavy work, lack of sleep, pregnancy and menstruation are only some of the reasons to suffer from hormonal imbalance and therefore have pimples.

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