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RE: ADSactly Contest - SteemShort #3 - Post 3: Request for Last Part of the Story

in #steemshorts7 years ago

My entry:

The so-called husband, Solomon, takes off to the mountain. Adanma and her mother follow close behind. Solomon finds Moses and confronts him. In front of Adanma, Moses denies everything and claims Adanma is bewitched, insane, and needs his care. Adanma, incensed, calls him a liar and a devil. Her mother tries to take Adanma away but Moses reaches for her. Solomon stops him with a hard punch. Moses collapses. Her mother runs away. When the authorities arrive, they find only Adanma, sitting on the floor, crying. Moses is dead. A kettle lays between them. They ask Adanma what happened. She tells them. It doesn't make sense. Confused and skeptical, the authorities visit Queen to verify what Adanma told them. Queen tells them that Adanma can't be telling the truth. Solomon never returned and Mama was at her home, having given up trying to persuade her daughter to desist with her plans. They are all left to wonder what spell — what evil — created Adanma’s delusion, and are left to grapple with the destruction her insanity produced.

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