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RE: SteemShort #1 - Post 2: Request for the Middle Part of the Story

in #steemshorts7 years ago (edited)

Proposed contribution to the middle part..


The investigation went on for days and the police proved to be doing their best each time the media people come around to get updates.

They called so many people in for interrogation Including his strong opponent, sen. Henry, but they didn't get anything useful. No links to the murder was found with Henry, although he was the chief suspect.

Mrs Benson desperately seek justice for the murder of his husband. She even promised to reward the inspector of police beautifully if he would arrest the culprit.

A lot of people were tortured by the police. Even the security guard who was suppose to be on duty that night but absent was brough in for questioning.

The Benson's have 2 kids, James who is about 19 and Charles who is 13. Charles and James were having a serious quarrel in their room.

Charles asked what the will was doing in their room. It was the same document that the assassins came to collect the night they killed their dad.

James struggled with Charles to get it back. The document fell to the floor and their mum entered.

What will she do? Save his son or seek justice for his husband?

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Thank you for your valid summary.

Nicely writen, simple and well articulated