Update 100 day challenge / day 4

theoferri (45)in #steemitschoolpoetry • 7 years ago

flowers

Oh flowers
You are very impressed with the story of disepenggal thoughts
Your sensational shadow appears right in the retina of my eye
Without a secret story
You emit perfect light

Oh flowers
Your life is precious to be loved
Your charm is wasted if you do not see
A smile on a sunny moon in a pitch black night
Keep growing flowers until she sees your beauty

Note : stories about mama that is always blooming and beautiful, i use google translation ..

P.S. also add one small link to the Steemit School Discord at the bottom of your poems: https://discord.gg/hyfYQ9P

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7 years ago in #steemitschoolpoetry by theoferri (45)

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hopehuggs (67) 7 years ago (edited)

An absolutely stunning line "A smile on a sunny moon in a pitch black night"

Please remember though that a poem has to be 14 lines or more for the 100 Day Poetry Challenge. <3

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theoferri (45) 7 years ago

I just learned to make poetry ..
please advise from you ..
one suggestion from you is very useful for me

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