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nwamaka (47)in #steemitschoolpoetry • 7 years ago (edited)

Into the ocean I was willing to go
A promise of treasures untold
I'll swim a little as far as I'll go
It can only get that cold

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Into the ocean I was willing to go
The tide not like i was told
Pushing me as it's strength can go
There are levels to the cold

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Into the ocean I am willing to go
I own those treasures foretold
Against the tide I'll go
Let the ocean freeze cold.

If I drown- I drown
Drown is the new swim.

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7 years ago in #steemitschoolpoetry by nwamaka (47)

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aristokratos (50) 7 years ago

wow! I don't know why this erupts within me a nostalgic feeling.....maybe a part of me has it source from the ocean

Beautiful piece dear

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nwamaka (47) 7 years ago

Source from the ocean ke...

Are you the king of the sea?

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aristokratos (50) 7 years ago

smiles*** maybe I'm the keeper of the ocean..😊

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gloeze (54) 7 years ago

I like the phrase

Into the ocean I am willing to go...
If I drown- I drown

This speaks of determination. Nicely put @nwamaka

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nwamaka (47) 7 years ago

Thank you so much... I most times stay away from poetry but i decided not to anymore.

Thank you for your support always

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