(Steemit School Poetry 100 Day Challenge: Day 31) EXORCISE HER CALAMITY

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Dear All,

This poestry is my 31st submission.

Thank you.

 

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EXORCISE HER CALAMITY

by Ikhwanul Halim

 

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it was a strange day
at the ancient city.
all the doors are closed
bloody redness dirt roads.
there was something amiss,
still living the afterlife
of an ancient glory

 
it’s pouring outside
and she’s inside wishing.
a parch of linoleum
mark off the living room.
places she once lived in
existed only among wanderers.
how hollow, how ghostly

 
closer to a flagellant’s pleasure
at being scourged,
no lines of demarcation
to protect reckless girls
from the danger.
the danger of romance,
and the danger of curiousity

 
the whole idea of redemption
in delirious exultation
for a diminutive woman.
when she spoke in tongues,
in tongues translated into sounds,
in the language of laughter,
of spastic blurts or frenzy

 
they all shouted
of gospel preaching
at the ancient city

 

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Bandung, April 7, 2018

 

This is my 31st submission for 100 Day Poetry Challenge conceived by Daniel Pendergraft @d-pend. I am a beginner in English poetry.

If you want to participate, please do not hesitate to join Steemit School discord.

Big thank @d-pend for giving me this chance to participate in this event.

 

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they all shouted
of gospel preaching
at the ancient city

There is devotion in the ancient city.

This is great, you really should be intermediate now x

Great work, Aya. Everything, including presentation, was so well done:)