Bondage, Dominance, Submission, Sadomasochism: Living with Rats
Unbathed day eleven: Practicing dirtbag hygiene
In a rat infested apartment
Or are they pets?
Birthing within sofa arm rest stuffing
Beneath accidentally (isn't everything?)
Clothing iron singed plaid
Grandma's care package spaghetti
In a plastic tote live trap
White socks greyed
Hang dripping still crunchy
On cordellette strung
From one BDSM eyebolt to another
Filthy happy free
Progenitor varmint has lost his mind
Moving heavy dictionaries
Biting hoisting shoving
Raping Isabella behind the water heater
Every fucking night
High pitched dragging chalk
Pubic hair sore
Looks like an ingrown hair
Isn't it?
He always sweats before he cries
Must be from an earlier relationship
Scratch on my thigh swells
Wide round hardening
Beneath sunburnt sweaty skin
Doctor says staphylococcal
Quick scalpel oozes pusses creams
Gaining such experiences
Aren't I?
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Sooo... what do you folks think?
The subject is more intense and gritty than my particular tastes prefer, so I can't give fair feedback on the writing in this one.