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RE: HM4 Thunderbolt - It is attractive watch it can improve your personality

in #steemhunt • 7 years ago

Hi @mohammadfaisal,

Thanks for yet another hunt. Before I can approve it, this hunt’s description will have to explain why this (mechanical) watch should be featured on Steemhunt.

Currently the hunt’s description is merely a poor rewrite of the specs, completely with tons of typos.

Please improve this hunt first. Let me know via a comment reply when you’ve made requested improvement so I can re-review your hunt.

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     7 years ago 

    i have improve my hunt HM4 Thunderbolt.please review it again.please if it is able to approve please approve it soon.

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       7 years ago 

      I see no improvement whatsoever.

      For comparison the MB&F product site, side-by-side next to the hunt’s descriptioE910698D-D5A4-496C-980D-44164B602DAF.jpeg.

      Errors

      1. You don’t understand that the watch is available in multiple cases, yet not all those cases are features/one model.
      2. Multiple poorly translated (spun?) words
      3. Non-sensical words
      4. Numerous typos.
      5. Pretty much word by words rewrite, thus bordering plagiarism/content spinning.

      Offered a chance to improve the hunt’s description nothing was improved.

      I have to delist this hunt as this level of quality is not acceptable for site visitors. And it also falls under content spinning.