Good post @everittmickey. I would try and use some basic markdown code to format your posts a little better. You had your headers centered and in between each point you were trying to make. It looks good, but it would just read a little easier if they were larger headers and left justified.
Here is a link to basic MARKDOWN CODE. Just take a look at this method and see what you think? Good luck.
http://github.com/adam-p/markdown-here/wiki/Markdown-Cheatsheet
Sample:
Here is a sample of a large header
Here is a little smaller
that was a Horizontal Rule
here is a comment quoted from someone else
Anyway, those are just some samples... Try the link and see what you think.
I tried using markdown code in my first post on steemit, and it failed miserably to function (I was just trying to make links), so I had to go back to using HTML code instead. I have used the bold code, but thats it. Not really impressed with markdown yet.