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RE: Pitter-Patters in the Sanatorium
Hold tight.
That's such a cruel thing to say to the poor guy. Are you going to write more of this story? The new prompt might come in handy:
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-221-5-minute-freewrite-monday-prompt-detective
I actually imagined that the person breaking him out of the insane asylum would be his gay lover and that they would have locked him up because they were trying to lobotomize the gay out of him, because in my mind this is like, a 1960s insane asylum that tortures people who aren't sufficiently normal. They'd beat up a lot of bad guys in the hallways in their dramatic escape, and then run away to the jungles of Central America and live out the rest of their days fishing and practicing survival skills out on the beach.