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in #science7 years ago

beautiful music, honestly, I do not really understand music, I just enjoy your writing, and have gained some valuable knowledge from this paper, I have also explored some of the resources you have in your writing, good work, highly qualified content , the video is good, how do you make it that way?

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Feedback: use periods to separate sentences.

This is very hard to read with all the commas, because you haven’t separated sentences, therefore it is unclear what you’re asking.

"Im sorry"

I mean the video is good, how to make that?

ok, no problem.. thank you for responted my coment. :)