Hi @purpleprose,

I appreciate the citation of the author of the quote you used. The work you produced originally ended up being overshadowed by such a large direct quote. Without coming across as critical, I think your work would benefit from smaller quotes that you speak directly to (possibly explain some science jargon that was used in the quote and discuss the implications of the findings). Including excessively large direct quotes, while faboulous in transparency, will often be entirely skipped by non-academic audiences as it is just too much to take in without the author 'holding their hand' through the complex content.

Great writing overall and it's great to see informed people dispelling the rubbish that people like Alex Jones perpetuate on the internet.

All the best,
Nick