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in #sci-fi6 years ago

Detailed description of characters and the surroundings, which gave me an opportunity to imagine everything like I would be watching movie. Sometimes it is interesting when people read and create their scenes in head, the more details you put into the story the more interesting and capturing will be a story. Like how you described that mad motorbike ride, how much and how different emotions, thoughts were running during this short time in the head. The fact when you realize that there is something that you can’t prevent and that will be the end that is the moment when we do not know what is going to happen to us if we are in such situation. Great writing.