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RE: 🎤 STEEMIT RAP CHALLENGE WEEK #7 SUBMISSION THREAD - SUBMIT YOUR VIDEOS! 🎧

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envision a dope place where ex sinner men roll
conditions & hope taste sweeter than a cinnamon roll
we'd evoke enough wisdom to wanna see em evolve
to not revolve around systems, no prison at all
no xenophobes, our mind exposed open like centerfolds
find the token no holdin' back like sweater holes
if you fear the rules, prepare the ruse for the federals
and get them dirty politicians of their pedestals
i'll Steemit with a fire torch so you can tell I'm here
life is short, we've all got withering telameres
tell em ears to be listeners like writtens from De la Mere
we on a mission to build the pressure to the big oppressor
send the message these wounds need a dressing (addressing)
so push the envelope like a pen pal with them feels
don't let your mind be underutilized like hemp fields
i hope my deadly lines don't go over heads like chem-trails

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Smooth flow, also, that last line, dope one :)

We all got witherin telomeres? Fukn right. Good shit girl.

Good stuff.

@kaykunoichi letting the creativity flow with positive content is always a WIN