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RE: Imposition

in #psychology7 years ago

I agree. There needs to be more people curating and critiquing so that all of the creators can become more familiar with what their audience wants. I love your poem. I can’t say I completely understand every aspect of it and that’s ok because I know that will be up to interpretation ultimately. I do appreciate the note first. I often wonder where an idea came from or what the author was thinking about as they created. For me, personally, it gave me the background I needed to set the scene. I loved it. I may dabble in trying it out myself from time to time. Thank you so much for sharing! I am following :)

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Yes, the background is very helpful to give the reader some structure. Also, perhaps a bit SHORTER poems would be more digestible as well. I have found the poems which go down only ONE photo to be most manageable. When I scroll down to find another large CHUNK of text it feels a bit exhausting (for the reasons mentioned in my last comment). Also, your recent hip-hop lyrics post was very good because it has the music to add some structure...