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RE: "They Call Him Dan" (poem-contest) ... 20,000 STEEM Delegation Contest
"They call him Dan, a special man,
bred to waken the steemit clan,
to offer a pot of honey,
as all are lured by money"
"They call him Dan, a special man,
bred to waken the steemit clan,
to offer a pot of honey,
as all are lured by money"
Apologies! Only saw now that I made a mistake with the; "pot of money" It should be "honey" (to draw)
I corrected it as you can see. Blessings!
@papilloncharity,
I was going to mention ... you can't rhyme a word with itself. "Honey" (especially a pot of it), makes eminently more sense. :-)
Quill
@papilloncharity,
Machiavellian realpolitik ... noteworthy for it's originating from a fellow named "Butterfly Charity." :-)
Great job, mate. :-)
Quill
Thank you Sir! Just a quickie taken off the cuff! Your prose is certainly noteworthy! Blessings!