Erotic Contest "Water" - A Poem

This is my second entry for @queen-of-heart's sexual fantasy writing contest on the topic of water. Well, though poetry is not really my forte, some type of inspiration hit me, while I was taking a shower (of course)! So here it is, I hope you enjoy it. In either case, I'm happy to read comments about it.

Water, Water, the soft warm summer rain

Getting caught in it while walking home

Soaked my dress so it sticks tightly to my skin

Bra and panties are on display, as what's underneath

No reason to get upset, I still have a mile to go.

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Water, Water, swimming in it, it lets you float

Like your strong bodied, muscular lover,

Who picks you up and throws you in the air,

As if you were a little girl, or a dancing-doll ballerina

And when you land you know how you will be impaled.

Water, Water, seeping out of your pores

Cooling you down when your body is most hot

Carrying in it our own personal smell, like a fingerprint

In the gym some strong arms embrace you from behind

The smell is enough to know how much you want him.

Water, Water, you can't breathe under it

Holding your breath as you explore the under sea

So magical and full of joy, just a little bit more ... 

Like when licking your lover to an orgasm

"No breath-break yet, baby, I'm almost there."

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Water, Water, we carry it inside ourselves

Then sometimes we need to let it out discretely

I've been asking Mistress for hours for a permission ...

The pressure gets so much that I can't hold it any more

"You wet yourself again, you're such a naughty girl!"