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RE: Steemit Poetry Contest #10 " Snowflake" (Original Poem by @dagger212)
I liked the way you told this story from the perspective of a snowflake. I think the progression in the way you tell it pulls the reader in and allows us to share in the adventure a little bit. I also like the reference to the "ancient mountain" and the depth it gives to the poem right off the bat. Nice write.
Thank you! These 12 line poems that @terrycraft requires for his contests really make it challenging to present big ideas. Every word needs to count so setting the right tone early is important. Thanks for reading and replying.