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RE: Steemit Poetry Contest #10 " Snowflake" (Original Poem by @dagger212)

in #poetrycontest7 years ago

Oh my this is so beautiful!! The feeling it gives you of being swept along with the growing current is hair raising! I have always loved how water makes the journey from a drifting flake, to a gushing stream, to a swelling river and one day, hopefully, the ocean, or in this case, a flood. You have captured the dream of that drifting snowflakes so fantastically! Good luck!

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Thank you! I'm with you on the journey from the flake to the sea. I've gone that route in some of my past poems. This is for @terrycraft's contest though and the "topic" is growth so a snowflake to a flood seemed more appropriate. Thanks for reading and replying. I appreciate it!