A New Age (original poetry)
A New Age
where a glance becomes a sequence of oblivion
and your iris becomes my enduring night
the world is turned inside out at the dawn of a new age
and we are cocooned in this epoch of love
Zameena Zen
where a glance becomes a sequence of oblivion
and your iris becomes my enduring night
the world is turned inside out at the dawn of a new age
and we are cocooned in this epoch of love
Zameena Zen
This so effortlessly expresses an inexpressible interpersonal dynamic. This is an excellent display of what poetry is supposed to do: transcend language. Really wow.
Thank you for such kind words! Like always, means a lot coming from you
Lovely picture, awesome poem my best phrase was world is turned inside out at the dawn of a new age..
Well done
Thank you!
Beautiful stream of words, similar to a Haiku and kind of clearly makes me think of what a perfect fleeting moment can do and change for anyone experiencing it . Fantastic
I lived in Japan for a few years and became very inspired by Japanese aestheticism and poetry. I really enjoyed your interpretation of the poem. Thank you!
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