Evocative and mystical, @Johnjgeddes. Is this a love letter addressed to one's mother, or the Divine (and, does it matter... to define is to limit)?
The 'dark salt sea / Burst into light' contrast is quite powerful, well done.
Evocative and mystical, @Johnjgeddes. Is this a love letter addressed to one's mother, or the Divine (and, does it matter... to define is to limit)?
The 'dark salt sea / Burst into light' contrast is quite powerful, well done.
yes, it is a love letter and the ambivalence of symbolism leaves it open to different interpretations on many levels. Thank you
Very true, John. Here’s an ode to imagination that you might appreciate: https://steemit.com/poetry/@yahialababidi/the-night-and-its-bewitching-might-where-poets-dream-and-cry-original-poem
Sweet dreams