Poem / Permit
Permit
There's a place just over the hill
The place of the old guy named bill
Ask him where he's been
He'll tell you of all the things he's seen
Take a trip over to Matty's place
Look at her face
Look at the scars from before
Where others' frustrations bore
Ask Mr. Mell
Why he thinks this town is hell
There are only two reasons
One: everyone here has been accused of treason
Two: nobody listens to our innocent pleading
Each one of us: Convicts
Evicted from our home town for not having a living permit
By Ethan
2017/10/28
Amazing work man, I really admire your work . I am a poet too and your work inspires me. Keep it up my friend. Plz Have a look at my blog , any suggestions and feedback on my writing skills ?
Beautiful :)
Beautifuly express about the beauty of nature and polluted conditions of towns.you have a great passion with the playing with words. Thanks.
Wow, a very deep poem that gives one pause! Thank-you Ethan!
hi @xxsenpaixsamaxx gorgeous poem
Thank you :) I went through some of your content and it's really good. Keep it up :)
We need more poetry!
Why does this remind me of the plight suffered by the Rongiya Muslim refugees right now?
'Each one of us: Convicts
Evicted from our home town for not having a living permit.'
Very sad yet very striking.
Nice!
By the way I'm new to Steemit. Do follow me if you like my introduceme section
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Sorry for taking ya'll time otherwise. Great day or night wherever you are!
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Thank you for stopping by, I'll give it a look :D
good one @xxsenpaixsamaxx and remember ...
Cool poem mate and nice use of visuals.
i'm keen to have a go at putting some writings on steemit, see https://steemit.com/writing/@lordnigel/an-interactive-story-for-steemit-readers-you-choose-the-path-by-upvoting