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RE: Secrets....(An Original Poem)

in #poetry7 years ago

The poem is really nice. Though, I feel like the lines below contradicts each other.

I hope you never ever find out my secrets,
Keep loving the true me you always know,

In this line you ask him to not never find your secrets. Yet, you ask him to love the real you. For him to love the real you, you need to reveal everything to him, that includes your secrets. Trust after all is very important in love. Anyways, that is just my opinion. I wish you a pleasant day.

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thanks, I changed it