Terry's Poetry Tryings. I wish I could wake up at home...

in #poetry7 years ago








The sun above my head - all roads ahead...

This means that the today, for sure, will great!

This means that I'm full and start my way!

This empty place just whispering... don't stay!



My life is a friendly highway -
More companions and fewer potholes...
Here I'll find the truths of ancient scrolls...
Here I'll meet a lot of inquisitive souls...



The sun behind my back - a road ahead.

This means that for today is not so bad.

This means I am alive and keep my way!

This means that one good day I'll find my bay...



My life is an old dusty road -
Many comrades, but far more potholes...
Here I learned the truths of wise scrolls...
Here I met a lot of lost souls...



The sun left in the past... I lost my path -

This means today is just hope's wraith.

This means I'm alone and failed my way!

This means for all mistakes I must to pay...



My life is a way through a thicket -
No more friends, just lost goals...
I break all the truths of yellowed scrolls...
I - one of the empty lost souls...






Sincerely, Terry Craft.


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Hey @terrycraft, great post! I enjoyed your content. Keep up the good work! It's always nice to see good content here on Steemit! Cheers :)

As you journey down the road
With the blue right sky above
You seem just to glow
For the stress of the past wont show

Now you put a smile on that face
A grin that never fades

Thus poetry is the same as I feel right now. no more friend ,,, :)

Very touching and heartfelt!
Do you often have inspiration to write poetry?

Nice... "My life is a friendly highway -
More companions and fewer potholes"

This is really somewhat true for a lot of people...

that's emotional...

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Good innovation. The voice sound a bit robotic. Find a way to tune the voice so that we don't notice the gaps.

great poem and poetry is very touching,
you have upvote and resteem from @arijuang

Always hope for best for right journey..
Think positive for getting path

My life is a friendly highway -
More companions and fewer potholes...
Here I'll find the truths of ancient scrolls...
Here I'll meet a lot of inquisitive souls...

I like the imagery here:). I believe the potholes represent the not friendly faces we meet in our path. I like the way this stanza progresses, and the end rhymes presents a flow that allow the reader an easier transition from one line to the next.