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RE: Thou Rainy Youth

in #poetry7 years ago

Beautiful poem.Honestly I love the 2nd para most
"Fluthering spoons of wind
That smooth back bronze locks,
Pastel enlivenment of the
Season's subtle change, that
Maketh thee the golden child!"
Loved it :)

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Thanks a lot for the feedback @splash-of-angs63! Glad you enjoyed it :D