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RE: Above The Cloud Of Possibilities

in #poetry7 years ago

nice poem, which express with beauty. and I give this potry to comment

when the letters scattered in the sky
follow the wind and hurrican
then fall to the earth
looking for their couple
join together into a word

human were can spell only
and then they can speak and make dialogue
to find the couple in the world
Copule of human is spirit
spirit to struggle in the storm of life
to stand on teir foot

When they watch the skay they didn't shock
See the word rain like meteor rain
word cah slash your heart your feeling
then dissappear your logical

and if you see the ninght
you will see dark only
but you can see stars which guide your steps
guide you spirit to get a honour
get your goal and make new succes generation

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