Hindi Poem Series #4 : Nasur : Emerging India's poem // नासूर: उभरती भारत की कविता

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)


 //नासूर//

जो खाँच बने कोरे कागज पे

                          लिखे नही है स्याही से,

वो  दबे  पड़े  पिछले पन्ने पे 

                          छिपे  नही  है  राही  से,

अभिमान नही सम्मान नही 

                        इनकी कोई पहचान नही

क्या यही है गौरव भारत की 

                    असहाय है ये,इन्सान नही?

सोच ऐ भारत! खोज के देख 

                 क्या प्राणहीन है प्राण नही|| 

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Do not completly agree with your poem . as mentioned in some previous comments things are changing in india and 2nd we are such a big democracy so its natural to have issues and poverty but if we all work together and make the society better then piture will be bit different :)

I love the last pic in your blog so upvoting and good to find someone who are bloging on nice topics..

keep bloging !

enjoy

Cheers
Dev

lovely and true poetry sir :)

Thanks dear

its become history,Now you can see New picture of modern india

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