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RE: LINGERING: A short tragic themed poem dedicated to ladies who have been through thick and thin for love
Hello pope1995
Your content is driving me crazy, bursting my brain like fire.... I can see your perfect use of biblical allusion.... The days of Adam and Eve...
Your use of simile... Transported me to the scene.. Meanwhile, grace to the ladies in the house.
Nicely written fellow... I love your work.
Hopping to do better