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RE: frozen

in #poetry7 years ago

"that this is not you
will never be you
not you in that room that you can't see -
a life you will never live
those arms you will never feel
that heart you cannot touch
you are not the one to soothe the hurt
to feel the joy and laughter
share that life"

That got me. Really amazing piece.

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thank you. i usually never ask people to read my stuff. i figure if they want to they will, so im glad i asked.