Girlfriend Electric

johnjgeddes (75)in #poetry • 7 years ago (edited)

Your ghost

Haunts me

nights;

But your image

Dies

At first light.

I talk

With you

In dreams,

But static

Clouds

What you mean.

This attraction

charged

By sighs and touches

electrifies

The air

About us.

© 2017, John J Geddes. All rights reserved

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7 years ago in #poetry by johnjgeddes (75)

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missiontothemoon (59) 7 years ago

Powerful... I like this A Lot!

johnjgeddes (75) 7 years ago

thanks, @misssiontothemoon

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ankitkukreja (33) 7 years ago

great post upvoted you keep going

booster (68) 7 years ago

This post has received a 6.82 % upvote from @booster thanks to: @johnjgeddes.

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doryaeriell (2) 7 years ago

@johnjgeddes Thanks for publishing this Charming instant in time for yourself..

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brittancassandra (-2)(1) 7 years ago

@johnjgeddes Excellent Tale. Awesome you ended up in the position to hustle your way out of your respective condition.

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pjcswart (65) 7 years ago

Beautiful and dark.

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minnowsupports (28) 7 years ago

I think this should be continued for about two times longer :) I love it.

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johnjgeddes (75) 7 years ago

thanks @minnowsupports

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mrblu (62) 7 years ago

@johnjgeddes nice poem. upvoted

kindly check my poem thanks

https://steemit.com/poetry/@mrblu/poem-could-this-be-love-i-m-feeling-right-now

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johnjgeddes (75) 7 years ago

thanks

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lukakorba (63) 7 years ago

The electrification of the air around two lovers due to the charge between them is probably one of the most poetic and beautiful things out there. You managed to express this love, so alive and so real, perfectly! Well done, and thank you for sharing!

PS: If you are interested and have some spare time, I have some poetry on my blog too. :)

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jadae (33) 7 years ago

I love everything about this, the lines, the colors, the poetry! Get it boo!!!

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johnjgeddes (75) 7 years ago

thanks for reading @jadae

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