Blue-Faced Lover

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)





The sea above us


Changes with every mood—


Dark with anger

Pale with sadness


Although right now,

it’s blue;


So sleep safely, Love,

In watery moonlight,


I'm watching over you.



© 2017, John J Geddes. All rights reserved


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Hm. This is very sweet. Great post, i must say.

Fantastic.i like this poem and upvoted.

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I like the way you makes use of nature images.

Your works are really unique.

Will get back to you soon on the poetry I want to analyze.

thanks mimy :)

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Fantastic.i like this poem and upvoted.

Blue, the colour of melancholy, but with an almost primitive sense of being protective added to it. I like it.

yes, very true, arthur