Hello sir @dobartim. The metaphor you uses on each line are impressive. I am just starting writing a poem and I am on my 2nd poem, but I have to be honest, sometimes I am running of metaphor. haha.

It is amazing how your mind works with your creativity. Even with your previous poems, I must say, it has imprinted my mind, like playing around my imagination. I always want to comment on each poem you have, but because they are so intense and have deep meaning, sometimes I couldn't dig deeper. haha. Thank you for sharing your poetry sir @dobartim. Now, I have the courage to make poem.

We WIN Together. God bless you! :)