When I Woke Up...

in #poetry7 years ago

When I woke up my vision was still hazy, makes it harder to see the ones who played me
I thank whoever is in charge of fate for the ones who made me, i noticed myself changing

When I woke up from my nightmare, i expected to face stares but the room was bare
life gets tough and loyalty goes scarce, why doesn't anyone care?

When I woke up I noticed some of my closest were really roaches,
hit rock bottom and disappeared like hocus pocus,

When I woke up and made a few changes, friends turn to strangers,
trying to avoid all danger

Now that Im awake i contemplate if i made the right decision, paving a way of wisdom,
will it even make a difference

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Very good poem friend.

thank you, more will be coming

That was great, I start rapping to it lol. "when I woke up my vision was hazy, makes it harder to see the ones who played me." Damn!

haha thank you, thats actually what i was sort of doing too lol...im glad we are on the same level...

True, just followed you, keep posting.