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RE: Purple Petals, A Poem

in #poetry • 8 years ago

"I wondered what had killed you
Was it the lack of bright sunshine
Or was it something more subtle
Yet far from benign"

this is like c4 explosive, yet looks like childrens play
GOOD JOB

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     8 years ago 

    Thanks for the feedback! It was really well put, and I couldn't be happier that my writing stands out to you!

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     8 years ago 

    I suggest you check my posts, there are a few things for you there
    (dont upvote them, it will give you a bad rep)
    between all of us, we know everything,

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