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RE: poetry: sometimes i open my brain, and words fall out
I open my brain and words fall out
This blew my cap off, the imagery behind this got me. I could picture a door to your brain, opening and the words like a leaky faucet, pouring out.
Forming a puddle of wisdom on the ground.
Its a great piece. I enjoy how you give a whole new meaning and understanding to the term if ain't broke, don't fix it
Great poem! And you have a way with words too, fego. Love that puddle of wisdom.
Hi, @storytellingza, thank you for the observation. To use the words of @krazykrista : we open our brains and the words fall out :)